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In the future,because of industrialization,a typical family will be required to move even more often than now,so families will be even smaller.The typical family may remain childless and consist only of husband and wife.A smaller number of families may raise children as their chief occupation,Ieaving the childless families free to move from job to job.

妙语评析:这是一篇记叙文。本文共分了四段来写。文章采用了总分的结构,使文章条理很清楚。而且各部分的描写很到位。文中用黑体标出的句子引导着每一段的主题,也是文中的骨干句。

句型模板

1.Since the beginning of the century,_________.

2.It is because of_________.

3.Moreover,_________,and more and more_________.

4.In the future,because of_________,so_________.

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Topic

Since the beginning of the century,_________.It is because of_________.

In the past_________.Often,too,_________.

But since_________.Moreover,_________,and more and more_________.So_________.

In the future,because of_________,so_________.The typical family may_________.A smaller number of families may_________.

议论文15例

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.娱乐活动多种多样。

2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性。

3.作为大学生我的看法。

范文欣赏

Recreational Activities

In the era of information and technology,there are all kinds of recreational activities.Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary,because they can help people relax from the hard work and study.Some of the activities,such as hiking,jogging,can help people relax physically;while some of them,such as surfing the Internet,can help people relax mentally.

However,some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives.Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities,and indulge themselves in those activities.At Iast they are Iured away from their study or their work.

In my opinion,we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them.Meanwhile,we should Iearn how to use those activities positively,and make them a helpful tool for our development.

(2008.6CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇利弊议论文。首先文章连贯性较好,思路清晰。文中用黑体标出的句子是议论文常用句型,也是各段的主题句。

句型模板

1.In the era of_________,there are_________.

2.Some of the_________;while some of them,_________.

3.However,some people think that_________.

4.In my opinion,we should_________.

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Topic

In the era of_________,there are_________.Some people think_________,because they_________.Some people_________;while some of them,_________.

However,some people think that_________.Some people may_________.At Iast_________.

In my opinion,we should_________.Meanwhile,we should_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay on the topic of EIective Courses to Choose.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.各大学开设了多种多样的选修课。

2.学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课。

3.以你自己为例……

范文欣赏

Elective Courses to Choose

With the remarkable educational reform and the increasing students‘demand,universities strive to offer a variety of elective courses for students to choose.Some higher institutions provide the optional course of cross-cultural communication,and some colleges have computer science on the curriculum of elective courses.

There are numerous reasons for students’selection of the courses,and I would Iike to explore a few of the most significant ones here.In the first place,students tend to take personal interest into consideration when they opt for an elective course.Possibly,that’s why cross-cultural communication course is so prevailing on campus.Additionally,some undergraduates attend certain optional courses for their career prospects and future development.Last but not least,to make up for their required credits is another universal reason as students select a course at random.

As far as I am concerned,picking up an elective course,I am inclined to give priority to personal interest.I am taking geographic research and discovery course in that I‘ve been greatly keen on science since I was a kid.

(2007.12CET-4)

妙语评析:这是一篇关于大学生选课的综合评论类议论文。根据内容要点分为了三段。第一段为引言段,引入了所谈论的话题“多种多样的选修课”。用举例法来引入话题方法比较新颖,给人以新鲜感。第二段为主体段,谈论了文章的分论点,即“选择不同选修课的各种原因”。第三段是结论段,总结文章,表达观点,即“以自己为例……”文中用黑体标出的句子使文章的层次分明,条理清楚,是议论文常用主体结构。

句型模板

1.There are numerous reasons for_________,and I would Iike to_________.

2.In the first place,_________.

3.Additionally,_________.

4.Last but not Ieast,_________.

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Topic

With the remarkable_________and the increasing_________,universities_________.Some higher institutes_________,and some colleges_________.

There are numerous reasons for_________,and I would Iike to_________.In the first place,_________.Possibly,that’s_________.Additionally,_________.Last but not Ieast,_________.

As far as I am concerned,_________,I am inclined to_________.I am taking_________.

Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay.You should write at Ieast 120words following the outline given bellow:

1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会。

2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会。

3.我的看法。

范文欣赏

Spring Festival Gala on CCTV

Some people are in favor of the program.Those who Iike it have their reasons.First,they think that the gala is of tradition to us.What‘more,some feel that they can find nothing to do except watching this on the eve of the Lunar New Year.Besides,it is said that this is a good chance for a family to have a rest happily.

But others do not agree.People who dislike it have their reasons.Firstly,they say that they can find something else to do.Moreover,they argue that the spring festival gala on CCTV should not have been the most powerful program in this day.

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